Minor corrections and additions

Co-authored-by: John Johns <johnsjrii+github@gmail.com>

compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Yeesha: Many stories were there for the D'ni to learn from, but they didn't hear
 
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-Yeesha: The ancient tales of Thu'it's Ocean or, of course, the story of King Shomat and his brothers, which even speaks of gardens and death.
+Yeesha: The ancient tales of Thu'it's Ocean, or, of course, the story of King Shomat and his brothers, which even speaks of gardens and death.
 
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compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
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-Zandi: Check the wahrk bones behind the volcano.
+Zandi: Check the wahrk bones... behind the volcano.

compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
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-Zandi: Okay, so... you've got to use that handle in the Cleft to release the windmill brake. Okay?
+Zandi: Okay, so... (chuckles) you've got to use that handle in the Cleft to release the windmill brake. Okay?

compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_eng.sub

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Tyion: And, when possible, please refrain from making off with the cones. They a
 
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-Tyion: They have their place, and that place is NOT the backroom of the Guild of Messenger's Pub. I mean, this should go without saying, people. Come on.
+Tyion: They have their place, and that place is NOT the backroom of the Guild of Messengers' Pub. I mean, this should go without saying, people. Come on.
 
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compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Dr. Watson: Um, we know that many of you have been given access to Ages that hav
 
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-Dr. Watson: But let's just say that with your safety uppermost in our minds, we're pushing to approve those Ages just as quickly as we can.
+Dr. Watson: But w-- uh, let's just say that with your safety uppermost in our minds, we're pushing to approve those Ages just as quickly as we can.
 
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@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ Dr. Watson: In other words, if you use them, you do so at your own risk.
 
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-Dr. Watson: We will continue to remove these artifacts if they're found. So far that has proved fruitless.
+Dr. Watson: We will continue to remove these artifacts if they're found, but so far that has proved fruitless.
 
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