From a2a42f880634ab077d7aeef17da6f5b0e892937e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ZarothYe Date: Tue, 10 May 2022 08:42:34 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Minor corrections and additions Co-authored-by: John Johns --- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp01_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC03b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub | 4 ++-- 7 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub index a6c6b520..39c41a69 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Yeesha: Many stories were there for the D'ni to learn from, but they didn't hear 2 00:00:05,700 --> 00:00:13,200 -Yeesha: The ancient tales of Thu'it's Ocean or, of course, the story of King Shomat and his brothers, which even speaks of gardens and death. +Yeesha: The ancient tales of Thu'it's Ocean, or, of course, the story of King Shomat and his brothers, which even speaks of gardens and death. 3 00:00:14,000 --> 00:00:15,500 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp01_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp01_eng.sub index 72ecb108..f47ecc4a 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp01_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp01_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:04,600 -Yeesha: [garbled].shorah .rekooahn trekleft preniv legloen b'rem +Yeesha: [garbled] .shorah .rekooahn trekleft preniv legloen b'rem diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC03b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC03b_eng.sub index 8028b5e3..30ccd506 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC03b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC03b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:02,400 -Zandi: [whispering]It's in the bedroom... in the Cleft. +Zandi: [whispering] It's in the bedroom... in the Cleft. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub index cd0785ed..22ffd894 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:03,200 -Zandi: Check the wahrk bones behind the volcano. +Zandi: Check the wahrk bones... behind the volcano. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub index ba867065..920d0629 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,100 --> 00:00:08,100 -Zandi: Okay, so... you've got to use that handle in the Cleft to release the windmill brake. Okay? +Zandi: Okay, so... (chuckles) you've got to use that handle in the Cleft to release the windmill brake. Okay? diff --git a/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_eng.sub index 6037fef9..abf7deaa 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_eng.sub @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ Tyion: And, when possible, please refrain from making off with the cones. They a 13 00:02:51,800 --> 00:02:59,600 -Tyion: They have their place, and that place is NOT the backroom of the Guild of Messenger's Pub. I mean, this should go without saying, people. Come on. +Tyion: They have their place, and that place is NOT the backroom of the Guild of Messengers' Pub. I mean, this should go without saying, people. Come on. 14 00:03:01,600 --> 00:03:13,400 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub index 9360b940..ca875e08 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Dr. Watson: Um, we know that many of you have been given access to Ages that hav 10 00:01:16,400 --> 00:01:25,600 -Dr. Watson: But let's just say that with your safety uppermost in our minds, we're pushing to approve those Ages just as quickly as we can. +Dr. Watson: But w-- uh, let's just say that with your safety uppermost in our minds, we're pushing to approve those Ages just as quickly as we can. 11 00:01:27,800 --> 00:01:31,400 @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ Dr. Watson: In other words, if you use them, you do so at your own risk. 25 00:03:12,200 --> 00:03:17,800 -Dr. Watson: We will continue to remove these artifacts if they're found. So far that has proved fruitless. +Dr. Watson: We will continue to remove these artifacts if they're found, but so far that has proved fruitless. 26 00:03:18,000 --> 00:03:26,400