From fe84d0c65a35e58b4bb0d33b9e66152843c9796f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ZarothYe Date: Sat, 30 Apr 2022 09:23:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Grammar and capitalization adjustments. Also whark -> wahrk. --- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrsnSpeech_eng.sub | 6 +++--- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_KdshSpeech_eng.sub | 4 ++-- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech01a_eng.sub | 4 ++-- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02a_eng.sub | 8 ++++---- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03a_eng.sub | 6 +++--- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03b_eng.sub | 4 ++-- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech04_eng.sub | 4 ++-- compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_TldnSpeech_eng.sub | 8 ++++---- compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp02_eng.sub | 8 ++++---- compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC01b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes02b_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/krelFanQ12022_eng.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_fre.sub | 2 +- compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub | 2 +- 18 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-) diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub index 4ba746f2..a6c6b520 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrdnSpeech_eng.sub @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Yeesha: But no one truly listened. 4 00:00:16,500 --> 00:00:21,300 -Yeesha: The Garden Ages of the proud are beautiful, but they are built on the backs of the Least. +Yeesha: The Garden Ages of the Proud are beautiful, but they are built on the backs of the Least. 5 00:00:21,900 --> 00:00:25,800 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrsnSpeech_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrsnSpeech_eng.sub index 84b9940a..874594e8 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrsnSpeech_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_GrsnSpeech_eng.sub @@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ Yeesha: Let me tell you of King Kerath, dare I speak ill of him. 2 00:00:03,800 --> 00:00:14,000 -Yeesha: One of the great kings, but yet, he was the maker of the proud. For it was his system of guilds that served as the foundation of power, and corruption. +Yeesha: One of the great kings, but yet, he was the maker of the Proud. For it was his system of guilds that served as the foundation of power... and corruption. 3 00:00:15,200 --> 00:00:22,800 -Yeesha: The powerful need control; fortresses and garrisons to guard their power, and soon the guarding is yet another thing to be proud of. +Yeesha: The powerful need control -- fortresses and garrisons to guard their power -- and soon the guarding is yet another thing to be proud of. 4 00:00:23,800 --> 00:00:29,800 @@ -16,4 +16,4 @@ Yeesha: Layers within layers built to preserve their Ages and their pride from t 5 00:00:30,600 --> 00:00:38,600 -Yeesha: And yet, it is from within that most nations fall. And so the mighty garrisons of D'ni now stand vacant. +Yeesha: And yet, it is from within that most nations fall. And so, the mighty garrisons of D'ni now stand vacant. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_KdshSpeech_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_KdshSpeech_eng.sub index a470dddf..80600cc6 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_KdshSpeech_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_KdshSpeech_eng.sub @@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ Yeesha: His bones are the bones of D'ni. 3 00:00:06,600 --> 00:00:12,000 -Yeesha: He clung to the teachings of good King Naygen, who required good citizens to cling to their treasure. +Yeesha: He clung to the teachings of good King Naygen who required good citizens to cling to their treasure. 4 00:00:13,200 --> 00:00:19,200 -Yeesha: This Kadish you have seen would not give back, would not return, would not let go. +Yeesha: This Kadish you have seen would not give back. Would not return... would not let go. 5 00:00:19,800 --> 00:00:25,400 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech01a_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech01a_eng.sub index a4b58716..4e47a65f 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech01a_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech01a_eng.sub @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Yeesha: And I knew that at the end of such great paths must lay a great purpose. 8 00:00:39,400 --> 00:00:46,800 -Yeesha: Cleft. The Fissure in the desert, the wound in the Earth, the path to things beneath the surface. +Yeesha: Cleft. The fissure in the desert, the wound in the earth, the path to things beneath the surface. 9 00:00:48,200 --> 00:00:55,400 @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Yeesha: It was there I sought to find my purpose. It was from there I came to kn 10 00:00:56,600 --> 00:01:04,200 -Yeesha: These D'ni people who are now gone came thousands of years ago to the shelter of the cavern to return to Leastness. +Yeesha: These D'ni people, who are now gone, came thousands of years ago to the shelter of the cavern to return to Leastness. 11 00:01:05,000 --> 00:01:10,200 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02a_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02a_eng.sub index e4fec59d..c0fdf74f 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02a_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02a_eng.sub @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Yeesha: My humble darkness lasted only a short time before I began to bask in wh 5 00:00:18,600 --> 00:00:28,000 -Yeesha: My gift, my path. The knowledge of my father and the dreams of my mother pierced a hole in the darkness. In the weakness. +Yeesha: My gift, my path. The knowledge of my father and the dreams of my mother pierced a hole in the darkness... in the weakness. 6 00:00:28,800 --> 00:00:31,800 @@ -32,15 +32,15 @@ Yeesha: It was the same with the D'ni, the same cycle. Light opens the darkness. 9 00:00:48,000 --> 00:00:53,600 -Yeesha: The D'ni found power in these books, these books you use to travel. They were a gift from the Maker. +Yeesha: The D'ni found power in these books -- these books you use to travel. They were a gift from the Maker. 10 00:00:54,800 --> 00:01:03,400 -Yeesha: These Ages you travel to were their Ages. Remarkable places giving life, and taking life. +Yeesha: These Ages you travel to were their Ages. Remarkable places giving life... and taking life. 11 00:01:05,200 --> 00:01:14,000 -Yeesha: This shadow came over them, this shadow of light, for it was in their enlightenment that they considered themselves better; better than the Least. +Yeesha: This shadow came over them, this shadow of light, for it was in their enlightenment that they considered themselves better... better than the Least. 12 00:01:15,800 --> 00:01:17,200 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02b_eng.sub index c6aec887..2657add6 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech02b_eng.sub @@ -8,4 +8,4 @@ Yeesha: The Bahro will be returned; these pillars are our Journey. The return of 3 00:00:14,600 --> 00:00:18,000 -Yeesha: The bringing away, and the bringing back. +Yeesha: The bringing away... and the bringing back. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03a_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03a_eng.sub index d2ff749f..4bb2a048 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03a_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03a_eng.sub @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:05,000 -Yeesha: You return again, return to hear more, return for a third pillar. +Yeesha: You return again. Return to hear more... return for a third pillar. 2 00:00:05,800 --> 00:00:09,600 -Yeesha: It's an interesting cycle, this coming and going, giving and taking. +Yeesha: It's an interesting cycle -- this coming and going. Giving and taking. 3 00:00:11,000 --> 00:00:17,400 @@ -12,4 +12,4 @@ Yeesha: Returning is what you must do, for you have torn in half the very being 4 00:00:18,000 --> 00:00:21,200 -Yeesha: You have heard their pain, don't falter. +Yeesha: You have heard their pain; don't falter. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03b_eng.sub index fd888b6b..77e7e55e 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech03b_eng.sub @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:08,400 -Yeesha: The people of D'ni didn't return easily. They only would take, until all was taken from them in the Great Returning, the Fall that destroyed them. +Yeesha: The people of D'ni didn't return easily. They only would take until all was taken from them in the Great Returning, the Fall that destroyed them. 2 00:00:10,200 --> 00:00:13,800 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Yeesha: I could change things, I could move things... I could control things. 5 00:00:32,800 --> 00:00:41,000 -Yeesha: I learned beyond my parents, I learned beyond all. I wrote Ages against D'ni challengers, Masters of the Art, and they were beaten. +Yeesha: I learned beyond my parents: I learned beyond all. I wrote Ages against D'ni challengers, Masters of the Art, and they were beaten. 6 00:00:42,400 --> 00:00:44,600 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech04_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech04_eng.sub index 449ebac6..aad3fd4b 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech04_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_Speech04_eng.sub @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Yeesha: It's the whispers and murmurs that reveal the simple truths. 3 00:00:11,800 --> 00:00:18,600 -Yeesha: You hold the precious soul of a Bahro in your Age, in your hand. Such things are not meant to be held. +Yeesha: You hold the precious soul of a Bahro in your Age... in your hand. Such things are not meant to be held. 4 00:00:20,400 --> 00:00:28,400 @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Yeesha: This is my journey too. I am returning what has been given. 8 00:00:48,200 --> 00:00:59,000 -Yeesha: These years I've spent, this path I've traveled, this gift I've been given. This purpose weighs on me, my burden, the legacy of my father, Atrus. +Yeesha: These years I've spent... this path I've traveled... this gift I've been given. This purpose weighs on me. My burden, the legacy of my father, Atrus. 9 00:01:00,000 --> 00:01:03,600 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_TldnSpeech_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_TldnSpeech_eng.sub index f9797ebe..1934a5ce 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_TldnSpeech_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/bhroYeesha_TldnSpeech_eng.sub @@ -1,18 +1,18 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:05,600 -Yeesha: Did you see the hidden caves, and the cages? It is where the proud would keep the Least. +Yeesha: Did you see the hidden caves, and the cages? It is where the Proud would keep the Least. 2 00:00:06,200 --> 00:00:11,400 -Yeesha: The Least were only animals, after all... (sighs) Animals that could Link. +Yeesha: The Least were only animals, after all.... (sighs) Animals that could Link. 3 00:00:12,200 --> 00:00:19,000 -Yeesha: They could be put to work or play. They could ease the burden of the proud and fill their free time with entertainment. +Yeesha: They could be put to work or play. They could ease the burden of the Proud and fill their free time with entertainment. 4 00:00:20,800 --> 00:00:27,400 -Yeesha: Quietly as D'ni slept, their lives were taken, because the proud make the rules. +Yeesha: Quietly as D'ni slept, their lives were taken, because the Proud make the rules. 5 00:00:28,800 --> 00:00:31,800 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp02_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp02_eng.sub index c4cefcdb..91c41a3c 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp02_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftYeesha_IntroSp02_eng.sub @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Yeesha: The storm is coming. 7 00:00:26,000 --> 00:00:29,900 -Yeesha: Have you heard of the city? The deep city, the ancient Uru? +Yeesha: Have you heard of the city? The deep city, the ancient uru? 8 00:00:31,500 --> 00:00:33,800 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Yeesha: Where there was power to write worlds. 9 00:00:34,900 --> 00:00:44,500 -Yeesha: For thousands of years, the city lived... lived beneath the surface. Keeper of the secret, keeper of the power, keeper of the Ages. +Yeesha: For thousands of years, the city lived... lived beneath the surface. Keeper of the secret. Keeper of the power. Keeper of the Ages. 10 00:00:46,100 --> 00:00:47,600 @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Yeesha: It seeks its own path uncontrolled except that it flows downward, always 14 00:01:03,200 --> 00:01:11,200 -Yeesha: D'ni, the city of Ages, of other worlds, died. But now it breathes again, it awaits. +Yeesha: D'ni, the city of Ages, of other worlds, died. But now it breathes again; it awaits. 15 00:01:13,500 --> 00:01:18,700 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Yeesha: It's as a fine tapestry, complex beyond comprehension, but now torn. 17 00:01:27,000 --> 00:01:31,800 -Yeesha: We will show you remnants; pieces of the tapestry. Pieces of the Journey. +Yeesha: We will show you remnants. Pieces of the tapestry. Pieces of the Journey. 18 00:01:33,000 --> 00:01:41,300 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC01b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC01b_eng.sub index c8b9281d..36a5d4e2 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC01b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC01b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:02,900 -Zandi: How could you miss the cloth on my Airstream? +Zandi: How could you miss the cloth on my Airstream? (chuckles) diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub index 425b3407..cd0785ed 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiJC04b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:03,200 -Zandi: Check the whark bones behind the volcano. +Zandi: Check the wahrk bones behind the volcano. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub index 5a287c17..ba867065 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes01b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,100 --> 00:00:08,100 -Zandi: Ok, so... you've got to use that handle in the Cleft to release the windmill brake. Ok? +Zandi: Okay, so... you've got to use that handle in the Cleft to release the windmill brake. Okay? diff --git a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes02b_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes02b_eng.sub index 2d1151e9..c3e3166b 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes02b_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/clftZandiMinRes02b_eng.sub @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:03,600 -Zandi: C'mon! You gotta push pretty hard on the windmill handle to get it going, all right? +Zandi: Come on! You gotta push pretty hard on the windmill handle to get it going, all right? diff --git a/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ12022_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ12022_eng.sub index c320183d..beef2675 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ12022_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ12022_eng.sub @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:16,800 -Tyion: Ok. We good? We good? Hello again, everybody! It's good to see so many returning faces, along with a handful of new ones who have joined us in the last couple of months. +Tyion: Okay. We good? We good? Hello again, everybody! It's good to see so many returning faces, along with a handful of new ones who have joined us in the last couple of months. 2 00:00:17,800 --> 00:00:22,000 diff --git a/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_fre.sub b/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_fre.sub index e0d6550f..4ab11385 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_fre.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/krelFanQ42021_fre.sub @@ -104,4 +104,4 @@ skyisblu: Toute personne intéressée par le travail doit garder un oeil sur les 27 00:05:19,600 --> 00:05:30,600 -skyisblu: Ok, tu penses que ça va le faire ? Super. Gardons nos doigts croisés, le rocher est dur... le tailleur de pierre est patient... ça va fonctionner. +skyisblu: OK, tu penses que ça va le faire ? Super. Gardons nos doigts croisés, le rocher est dur... le tailleur de pierre est patient... ça va fonctionner. diff --git a/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub b/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub index 8e12fb27..9360b940 100644 --- a/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub +++ b/compiled/sfx/krelWatson_eng.sub @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ 1 00:00:00,000 --> 00:00:08,200 -Dr. Watson: Hello? (tapping mic) Test, test. Victor, are we on? Ok. (clears throat) Ok, then. +Dr. Watson: Hello? (tapping mic) Test... test. Victor, are we on? Okay. (clears throat) Okay, then. 2 00:00:09,600 --> 00:00:19,000